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Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 16 ( permalink)

Mar. 19/08, 02:54 PM
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| | Thanks for all the comments guys, I will work on this stuff for a while and post some more videos eventually. Quote:
Originally Posted by goergen1 OK,
Power Clean - There is a mountain of stuff to go over. I am only going to hit on a couple of things. 1. What are you doing before you do the clean? It looks like you are having some sort of spasm.  I will advise on that when I know what you are trying to do. | There I was just practicing the clean pull before I started doing the power clean.  Quote:
Originally Posted by goergen1 2. Don't move your feet. you are not doing a jumping jack, a clean is up and down.
3. Keep the bar close to your body, | I see, I thought our feet were suppose to naturally jump to the side a little bit? I know I was definitely jumping out too wide, but aren't they suppose to jump out a bit?
Yeah, I have been working on trying to keep the bar close to my body but I always end up just using my arms to get the bar up ... that's my problem I think. Quote:
Originally Posted by goergen1 Just start with those things on the clean. There will be a lot more to learn after that. But, you have to start somewhere.
Squat - You squat is decent, it looks like you just need to do a ton more reps. Pull your elbows forward and get your back a lot tighter. Aside from that it is really a style thing. Make sure you squat using different foot spacings. You will find a stance that is most comfertable. (if you haven't already)
Front Squat - Keep you elbows up higher, especially at the bottom. Just do a million more reps and you will have a good feel for it. Deadlift - this is not bad either. Your hips rise up before the bar moves much on a couple of reps. I do not see a problem with the lockout. Keep your head in line with your body. (that is true for all lifts)
Overall you need to do these exercises for tons and tons of reps. That will get you the practice you need to really get a feel for them.
Where do you live at? There has to be somewhere you can go to get some live help from a coach of some sort. Specifically on the clean, you need the most help there and the best bet is going to be find a coach in your area.
Hope this helped. | Yes, thanks for the advice, definitely helped. I worked with a former olympic lifter at my college and he was trying to give me some tips on the power clean as well. He knew it was a total mess and thought I should just try to get the clean pull down first before I do anything else.
Last edited by realworksuks; Mar. 19/08 at 02:56 PM.
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Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 17 ( permalink)

Mar. 19/08, 02:57 PM
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Originally Posted by xswtsalvationx0 | Yeah I have read that article before, even before you posted it. It just feels natural to keep the head up. I dunno, is Eric Cressey correct about keeping your head down? |
Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 18 ( permalink)

Mar. 19/08, 03:00 PM
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Originally Posted by evolution Front squat-besides what others have said, I can't tell from the angle but it looks like you don't have the bar high enough.
Power Clean-feet jumping a bit more out and back than I'd like to see. At times the bar comes out too far in front of you. Your hang shrugs seem a bit too forced; you seem to be jerking the entire body instead of really shrugging and driving with the hips.
Squat-I can't see any real inheriant flaws. I will say that something bothers me about the way your knees lock out, but I can't put my finger on it. I would suspect that if you picked up a heavier weight, more apparent flaws would surface.
Deadlift-I wouldn't count you as really locking out. I'd put the hips a bit lower from the start.
...I'd like to see your form on some heavy triple or 5 rep weight. | I will try to get some more heavy videos... for sure I will be able to in a couple months when I will have a training partner this summer.
Yeah, with the front squats I have trouble keeping that bar high... especially when I am squatting down and near the bottom. It seems to want to fall down. I am not sure how to fix that. I guess just try to stay more upright? |
Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 19 ( permalink)

Mar. 19/08, 07:07 PM
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| | | EC is right. Basically what you're doing by keeping the head up is putting the cervical spine in hyperextension. Same with good mornings, follow the decent. |
Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 20 ( permalink)

Mar. 20/08, 12:09 AM
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Originally Posted by realworksuks Yeah I have read that article before, even before you posted it. It just feels natural to keep the head up. I dunno, is Eric Cressey correct about keeping your head down? | Yes Eric Cressey is correct. |
Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 21 ( permalink)

Mar. 20/08, 09:05 AM
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Originally Posted by realworksuks I will try to get some more heavy videos... for sure I will be able to in a couple months when I will have a training partner this summer.
Yeah, with the front squats I have trouble keeping that bar high... especially when I am squatting down and near the bottom. It seems to want to fall down. I am not sure how to fix that. I guess just try to stay more upright? | Get the bar up high. If you're able to breathe after the 3rd rep, it's not high enough  Kidding but not really.
If you don't have the bar up high enough and your body is not upright, the bar will come right out. That's why I like front squat...it's self-teaching. |
Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 22 ( permalink)

Mar. 20/08, 09:06 AM
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Originally Posted by xswtsalvationx0 Yes Eric Cressey is correct. | Correct. But I didn't notice that he was looking to the sky. Maybe I need to watch the video again, but what I noticed is his head is neutral. |
Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 23 ( permalink)

Mar. 28/08, 03:03 PM
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| | I have another deadlift video where I am lifting a heavier weight. Never lifted this heavy before, but it's maybe a 4-8 rep max? YouTube - Deadlift Form Check 245 X 3
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Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 24 ( permalink)

Apr. 01/08, 05:12 PM
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| | | bump.
Also, when you guys do 3 sets of really heavy deadlifts.... does it hurt to even bend over for a good 10 minutes at least? |
Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 25 ( permalink)

Apr. 01/08, 06:29 PM
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| | | How tall are you?
No it doesnt hurt to bend over. maybe that was from the night before with your bf. |
Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 26 ( permalink)

Apr. 01/08, 06:37 PM
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Originally Posted by tonymcclellan How tall are you? | I'm 5 feet 8.5 inches tall. Quote:
Originally Posted by tonymcclellan No it doesnt hurt to bend over. maybe that was from the night before with your bf. | the night before with my bodyfat? What do you mean?
Have you tried doing 3 sets with like max effort though? |
Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 27 ( permalink)

Apr. 01/08, 07:39 PM
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Originally Posted by realworksuks I'm 5 feet 8.5 inches tall.
the night before with my bodyfat? What do you mean?
Have you tried doing 3 sets with like max effort though? |
Boyfriend, not body fat. lol. |
Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 28 ( permalink)

Apr. 01/08, 07:47 PM
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Originally Posted by Phate89 Boyfriend, not body fat. lol. | lol... I didn't even think of that
So anyway.. |
Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 29 ( permalink)

Apr. 01/08, 08:30 PM
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| | | Max effort how? 3 reps? 1 rep? I always give max effort anyways.
I asked how tall you were because of how you move the bar out and over your knees on the descent. Im 6' and dont do that. You shouldnt have to either. Let me view it again. |
Critique my form please, power clean, squat, front squat, and deadlift, videos inside Post # 30 ( permalink)

Apr. 01/08, 10:33 PM
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| | | Hey Tony,
Do you mean that you should bend at the hips until the bar passes the knees or should the knees and hips bend at the same time? |  | | | Thread Tools | Search this Thread | | | | | Display Modes | Rate This Thread | Linear Mode | |
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